That sounds like an interresting story. You will do good.

Wow Zabby that story will be great can't wait for more*VAMPY*

i've thought bout writin a book bout vamp assassins...i'm in the draftin phase right now...but i'm intrigued with this...

Here it is! Enjoy!  Chapter 1:The Protagonist Part 1 Blood flings into the air as a man fell to the ground in the middle of the woods. Above him stood a demon ten feet high. This man wore a white shirt that covered the lower half of his face. Above that he wore a white trench coat and blue jeans. His shoes were black and his hair as white as snow and his eyes as blue as the sky. Blood surrounded his shoulder with three slashes gashed into it. The demon smiles and says “Did you really think you could defeat me HUMAN?”. The man stands up. He coughs up blood onto the demon’s body. “Heah heh heh heh! Your still going to try?”.The man pulls out a sword from a holster at his side. “THAT? Swords cannot puncture a demon! Everybody knows that!”. The man smiles and says “That mark… on your neck…”. The demon remains silent as the man continues “That mark… the closer it is to your forehead the more powerful the demon, correct?”. “W… wait… how did you know that? Humans are not supposed to know that!”. “Who ever said I was human?”. On the man’s cheek a scar in the form of an X travels up from his body. His sky blue eyes turn into a hell blaze of fire. “What? You have a mark!? It wasn’t there before!“ He cuts off the demon’s arm with the sword. The demon screams in pain!Then, the man stabs the demon multiple times in the chest from behind him. The demon falls onto one knee. The man stares into the demon’s eyes with a smile. “You’re a demon aren’t you?” asked the demon, “Why do you insist on killing your own kind?”. The man raises his sword into the air ready for an attack. “Who… Who are you?”. “Me? I’m the almighty Demon Slayer!”. The Demon Slayer he puts his sword back in its holster. “Heh… giving up?” “No…” He takes his hand and karate chops the Demons neck. He knocks him out.~~~ He walks up to a large city surrounded by a large dome. He looks at it and mutters “So, this city has an anti-demon barrier. It will protect them from the small guys, but the upper class demons can break through easily. He walks up to a large door. He hears a voice “What is your business here?”. The man replies “I am looking for work.”. “You will be let into a small area and taken to an anti-demon material room to check for a mark.”. A tingle crawls up the mans spine as he says back “It is alright.”.The door opens and ten armed men await him. He walks in and two escort him to a small room not too far away from the entrance. One of them ask “Please remove your weapon.”. He takes his sword and hands it to the guard. Another guard asks “Take off all of your clothes.”. The man glares into the guards eyes with a small frown. “I am sorry sir, but we must check every part of you.”. The man slowly strips down naked and sets his clothes on a table. They look around his body checking his whole body for a mark shaped like an X. They looked all over his body until they were finished. “I see no mark.” said one guard. But the other says “Look under his feet.”.“Alright.”. The guard bends down and grabs his left foot. The man’s eyes widen and he kicks the guard in the face slightly. The other guard holds up his guy and shouts “HEY!”. The man says “Woah woah woah! I am terribly sorry. It sort of tickled.”. The kick had knocked the guard down and when he stood up his helmet was broken. The guard laughs and says “That was some kick! Heh heh, now lets check your feet.” The guard checks both feet. “He’s good!” “Alright. You can put your clothes back on now.”. The man quickly puts his clothes back on.They take him to another small room, but it was outside the protected demon material. A man in a suit is sitting at a table with one empty chair and a guard standing in the room. The man sits down. The man in the suit says “Hello, I am Balg, the Head Chief Guard of this shin-dig.” He wait’s a moment for a chuckle, but the room was silent. “Anywhoo, we just need some information on you. If your looking for work, you must be looking for citizenship as well? Correct?” The man nods his head. “Good, now, what is your name?”. “Yuudai Akihiko”. They continue to ask him questions.~~~Now he is walking in a city. He has his hand on his sword. His face is hidden from the people walking around him as he looks around the city. He thinks “Where is he? I know he is around here somewhere.”. All of the sudden, in a bar, he hears some loud crashes in a bar near him. He walks inside to see what the commotion was. Three guys were standing above one man on the ground. They had just thrown him through a table. The man in the middle says “Now tell me again, what did you tell me?”. “I said that you shouldn’t treat a lady that way!”.“Awe… so your going to be the hero who saves this gal?” One of the men had a lady in his arms. He licks her cheek. “Yes!” said the man on the ground as he stood up. He balled his hand into a fist and head in for a punch. He begins punching the man’s check fast and furiously as the man just laughed. “Ha ha ha! Your too weak! You should just DIE you sniveling worm!” The man leans in to push him to the ground. Akihiko draws his sword and puts it to the bigger man’s neck. Akihiko says “If he cant save her, I will. Just let her go or I will cut your head off.”The man laughs “You couldn’t! I’m the law here! It would be a federal crime if you killed me!”. “Too bad I don’t care.” He begins to press his sword a little into his neck. A small trickle of blood goes down his neck. The other man says “Hey hey now! Nothing will get accomplished if he dies! If we want to change the law, we cannot use violence!”. Akihiko stares into the man’s eyes. The other says “Please, take your sword off of Sheriff Kar’s neck! Please!”. The Sheriff says “Yata. Let the girl go. We’re leaving.”. “B-But boos!”. “I said NOW!”. Yata lets the girl go. She runs to the back of the bar. The men leave the bar. The other man takes a deep breath in, then out. He looks at the girl in the back in the old bartender’s arms. He asks “Are you OK there miss?”.With her tear filled eyes, she nods her head yes. Akihiko puts his sword back into his holster. Then he walks out of the bar. The other man shouts “H-Hey! Wait up!” He runs out the door after him. He asks “So, whats your name Defender of Justice?” He replies “My name is Yuudai Akihiko, and I saved you for a different reason then what you might think.”. “Say! Your not from around here are you!? My name is Gutanamo Attakor. But just call me Gatts!” “…” “So, why did you save me in there?”. “I hate it when people tell other people they deserve to die. Those who claim someone should die should die themselves.” “But by that logic, wouldn’t you have to kill yourself?”He glares at Gatts. Gatts waves his hands “Alright! Alright! Listen, your basically a defender of justice right?”. “No.” “Well… would you consider teaming up with me to bring this city BACK TO ITS GLORY BEFORE THE CORRUPT POLICE SYSTEM DESTROIED THIS BEAUTIFUL AND FLUENT CITY OF…”. “Shut up. Your too loud…”. “Boy… you’re a buzz killer…”. But little did they know the other way from the city stood the three police from the bar. Kar puts his finger on his neck to swipe the small dot of blood from it. He looks at it. He puts his hand into a fist and punches the wall. He grabs his face and smiles. With his other hand he punches a hole into the wall. The other two ask “Uh… Sheriff?…” He tears his shirt off. A large X mark was on his chest. Kar says “That man… he is not human…”To Be Continued…