Akiraku's pome

Submitted by Akiraku on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 10:36

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"watch the blood drops trickle down my faceas my enemies are left in disgracei sheath my sword for one last timenever did i think the world would be mine" "From out of the shadows the enemy springsquickly i turn to see what attack he bringsi twist my sword and parry his blowwith a killing thrust i let him know,there is no mercy out here all alonewhere the darkness well's up to destroy what i know" "And so at last i turn to the skysand follow the stars to tell me the wayso that i might find myself at home again"

if u like

Submitted by Akiraku on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 10:54

let me know as i can write many many more depending on what peoples reactions are to my work. also if u give me a topic to work around i could come up with a poem tailored to individual taste. i have little else to do with my time and it keeps me occupied so no harm done. <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

Wow Akiraku real good i mean it!!!!

Submitted by night lover on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 11:41

But i think they are real violen.Write a pome about how it hurts to talk to someone real far away n u wish they were right herewith you ur a good friend that knows how to right pomes.

if distance were no obsticle

Submitted by Akiraku on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 12:45

if distance were no obsticle then i could be there next to you, so u could give me the divine inspiration to write the words that come to me that a beauty such as yourself would surely bring, let distance not matter for just a secondand it makes me feel so much betterif there was someway that i could be with youthe music of life would so better flowthere is so much i want to sayyet it seems so hard when your so far away <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

That was a real good pome Akiraku ^-^

Submitted by night lover on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 21:09

But some iz a very jelous person that is iceman13cthinks we r going out but let me be clear here i'm going out with iceman13c so we r just friends we cool Akiraku ur pomes r real good.

Sorry to interupt

Submitted by Aruseusu on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 21:20

uh yah i wanted to say you are an insparationalgenius nicepoems. I think there cool. keep writing.

kind words

Submitted by Akiraku on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 05:55

mean alot to me so thank you <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

hay I know you cannot see it be im in shock

Submitted by narutoxyzzzz on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 13:28

hey babe

Submitted by Akiraku on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 05:58

all im doing iss writing poems, nothing else implyed.glad you liked them, il write some more as the inspiration comes to me. Also iceman is my clan leader so i dont want to piss him off anyway lol. <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

Akiraku i loved it ^-^

Submitted by night lover on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 22:06

but man r u krazy yea so were kool n i talked 2 himlast night n he love my pome more than urs LOL ur krazy asa krazy man but i really lked tha pome u should write morecuz ur real good at wrighting pomes.And i really mean itwrite 2 u later peace out Akiraku.

hay Akiraku aka nah its me Kim.

Submitted by hina on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 14:03

I'm so =) to see you I still love you.

Hiya Kim

Submitted by Akiraku on Tue, 09/01/2009 - 07:27

long time no see, its good to be able to write to you again, my computer broke months ago and i kinda left you all in the lurch. it didnt help i got arrested aswell but thats not important^^ how ya been? <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

hay Akiraku i really like how you truned a poem in to a battle

Submitted by garland5000 on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 14:12

sean because i could imagain the battle as if i was there i really think you should enter this into www.youngwritersproject.org and se what other people and college students think its a great poem."I SHALL RETURN BY GEN MAC ARUTHER"

Urgh!

Submitted by Akiraku on Tue, 09/01/2009 - 07:33

that looks way too heavy going for me, looking at the other peoples entries i dont think my kinda poetry would fit in that well. also seems like a big deal too. il enter my poem in the local comp instead and if it does well then maybe il think about what you said. thatnkz for the support though, its really nice to get good feed back about my creativity <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

Nice poem Akiraku!

Submitted by Stephen Morsch on Mon, 08/31/2009 - 16:24

I havent written a poem in ages. O.O I really like yours. =3

i have now entered

Submitted by Akiraku on Fri, 09/04/2009 - 07:36

i have now entered that poem into my local poetry competition, its a yearly competition and i have never entered before so thanks for spurring me on. i dont think il win but il post the outcome when the results are called. i might get a book token out of it, who knows?? anyway thanks again for the positive feedback and il be sure to write some more. <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

a silent prayer

Submitted by Akiraku on Fri, 09/04/2009 - 07:41

i say a prayer to the sun god so that he might shine on me,i say a prayer to the water god so that it might not rain,i say a prayer to the earth god is it might not hurt when i fall,and i say a prayer to the wind god so that my tobbacco is not blown when i roll. im not a religious man yet that was what i was thinking when i had my roll-up this morning. <Choose your path Wisely as you only walk it once> Zombaukto legends^^

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