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Poetry
Submitted by Lord Ice Raptor on Fri, 02/11/2011 - 15:59
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If you can write poems post one here or if u just enjoy reading them then leave a comment on the poem
Sound fun?
I hope any1 who likes poetry will post.
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well in a few days when i write my L.A poem i'll write it here
(WARNING though it would suck)
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Poem
I write some but they are not good
i bet it's better than mine =) (by a lot) =D
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What
What
ur poems. they're probably REALLY good =)
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Ok
Ok
=)
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I dont intend to write them... i just read them =/ im bad at it
'' Care to respond or not respond ''
well i bet all of ur poems are worth reading and that is what
matters ne short cuts to the formatting problems?
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
i just re-read mine and it sucks im probably gonna
get a 2 on it (2=C)
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well the question is will u post it?
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
idk maybe i'll have my bro read it first =)
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it seems everyone likes getting off task in anothers thread
~I give you power if you Full Fill You Contract~
thats true =)
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I think I should bring up that thread
~I give you power if you Full Fill You Contract~
sure =)
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done
~I give you power if you Full Fill You Contract~ hmm so lord Ice is online
Broken Friendship (sucks but here) =)
Two best friends teasing each other like the sound of two Broadcasters making funny comments
Always hanging out together never apart at school like kittens attached to their mother
Playing on the Ferris wheel with our friends like a pack of dogs at a park
Closer than seeds in a pod
Always sticking up for each other like a teen helping a friend when bullied
One secretly having a crush on the other afraid he’d find out
Until that day of my birthday, when our class went kayaking and my partner and I were stuck in the lake like a kitten stuck somewhere high
Unable to take the embarrassment of being stuck and knowing everyone thought it was funny. I cried. And him; my best friend laughing too was as painful as a broken heart
Never together, we found new friends and slowly grew apart like baby birds leaving their nest
its not bad but perhaps as a critique u should connect it more
so the flow of thoughts isnt so scattered or if u wanted a detached feel u should have it flow less with less of a direct theme just suggestions k as soon as i work out my problems with formatting on this ill post my own. i dislike the diction in my poems to be distorted
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
yeah =) but i wanna see urs i bet it's
waay better than mine
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people say mine r good (slight understatement) but all my poem's
are missing something. wanna help me out?
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
IDK wat do i need to do? =.
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Ok so here's 1 of my poems--the title is where i used to be from
Where I used to be From.
Chores
and broken dreams
Chores
and “Is the house clean?”
“Boy, You know your name bring me the cream”
Way too many unwanted responsibilities
“Good job do better”
“What do ya mean you can’t find the keys?”
Going to school How are you
Fine is always my daily lie
Stealing and laughing having controlled freetime
“No Video Games!” “You’re Watching T.V.?”
Forgotten abuse and living happily
Bliss ignorance and a split identity
“It’s cause you’re a Gemini,
Believe me Honey.”
split again multiple personalities
Is that why I clean with such OCD
Friends that stick around and assist in my chores
Unable to think of a bigger bore
escape to school
No, I am not cool
Not allowed to roam the town
Misplaced steps and feelin down
pleasure in books only fantasy reading
Constant Degrading-Showers of Money
Redundant Choices given with the same outcome
well guess what I’m done.
Now its time to decide
Where I’m From
watcha think noone else has read this.
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
I like it,
'' Whenever you see me as Bowser i feeding the anger of my soul, but when i having glasses on im nicer that way to my friends on Manga dot com''
Thank You ne particular reason though?
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
What the moral of the poem about?
'' Whenever you see me as Bowser i feeding the anger of my soul, but when i having glasses on im nicer that way to my friends on Manga dot com''
soon as possible i will be moving out of my parents house
the poem is a slightly exagerated but it is close to my life
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
good luck
'' Whenever you see me as Bowser i feeding the anger of my soul, but when i having glasses on im nicer that way to my friends on Manga dot com''
thank you
Where da Party at?
Amazing it's REALLY good =D
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Thank You also. Is there a reason for you to say so?
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
It just seems really great and meaningful =)
and inspiring =)
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well thank u i was looking for a more specific answer but
it doesn't matter either way. I am Glad u feel that way.
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
broken frames
my eyes filled with joy....perhaps. my eyes are filled with the uncertain things i miss and love. the frame of happyness was shattered among the rest of my dreams. i believe that the sun will rise and the day will be a mystery. i pray that i wake up and i dont no what will happen, because my life is already a broken frame. broken into little pieces, paint chipped off, cracked in every direction, and forgotten.
<~~!!strange lil world we live in!!~~>
This is Great =D really is good it's sweet =)
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This is particularly sad and serious at once. Not Bad at all
hello Daisheyonna bin on in awhile?
If my life got any better i'd be living in your house!
thanks
yah i`ve been on ever once ina while....lol
<~~!!strange lil world we live in!!~~>
lalala hop skip jump around
lalala hop skip jump around the pound.
lalala hop skip slip and fall....
hahaha you gotta scrapped knee.
are you gonna help me up?
nope.
fine leave i`ll get up on my own and i dont need your help!
waawaawaa lip lip lip all the way around the pound.
waawaawaa lip lip lip too my front door...
waawaawaa lip lip lip slip and fall on the wet floor...
get up! get up! just walk it off...cause you can do it yourself with no help.
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The meaning is very clear nice little diddy that has a recurring
rhythm fits excellently in declaring independence for oneself through a trial
thank up for noticing river :)
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anytime
Where da Party at?
^^..you should put another poem on here...no?
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i will i would like to strangle the formatting on this website
i mostly write free verse and the format adds to effect when i have the time i will post an exceptional one
Where da Party at?
hmmp
hmmp
perhaps u would like to participate with the rest of the class..
emperor cheat is it, that would be of the utmost helpful qualities you could express rather than annoy others with your distasteful disapproving hmmp's.?
"its" like that that a lot
~I'm Everywhere But Nowhere~
~I'm the Only God with 14,000 points~
Anime
hey every one copy and paste your favorite poem
Where da Party at?
your name
i wrote ur name in the sky but the wind blew it away i wrote ur name in the sand but the waves washed it away i wrote ur name in my heart and forever it will stay.!!!!
lily <3's anime
i like that poem
"i shall return by gen mac aruther"
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