Working on a Ghost in the Shell project

Submitted by MrEder on Fri, 06/26/2009 - 16:44

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I'm currently working on a Ghost in the Shell project, which I started a few years ago. Pretty much, it started when I first watched the 1995 anime film and evolved from there. I created a character, whom my project kind of revolves around because there is so much stuff happening to her. I started by drawing 3 pictures, scanning them into photoshop, and coloring them. It then evolved into me writing a long paper filled with just information, such as a backstory, her life, events that are important that happened to her, ect. I am now actually writing my own GitS SAC season script, which my character is pretty much the center of. I've decided to go with 24 or 25 episodes and I've just finished writing Episode 6. When I finish my work and have it all protected for legal purposes, I'll upload it onto my profile so you guys can take a look and give me some feedback.

I see. "After a thousand

Submitted by MrEder on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 18:11

I see. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Well I find out stuff new

Submitted by iceman13c on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 18:13

Well I find out stuff new every day I comend the artist for the manga he is good The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Yes, he is. I am a large fan

Submitted by MrEder on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 18:19

Yes, he is. I am a large fan of his work, if you already couldn't tell lol. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

You know what I think I cant

Submitted by iceman13c on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 18:22

You know what I think I cant draw it because of the mood and the way she's drawn no emotion in her face which makes it hard for me to draw with nothing to work on The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Ah, I see what you're

Submitted by MrEder on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 18:52

Ah, I see what you're saying. The reason I drew her like that is because she really doesn't show much emotion. The reason for this is the life that she's had. She's been militarized since she was like 12 due to the fact that she is a member of a military dictated family. If you would like me to, I can give her some kind of emotion in my next drawing."After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Oh, I forgot to upload this

Submitted by MrEder on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:01

Oh, I forgot to upload this one the other day. Maybe this one would help. Her emotion here is quite stern. http://s625.photobucket.com/albums/tt331/MrEderRed/?action=view&current=HatsumiShinobiArmSuitCockpitOpenInk.jpg"After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

its still not enough I need

Submitted by iceman13c on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:21

its still not enough I need a smile or froun

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Gotcha. I'll give her some

Submitted by MrEder on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:23

Gotcha. I'll give her some more emotion in my next drawing. I'm thinking more along the lines of absolute sorrow. And there's a reason for this as well. I should have it done by Monday. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

I can only draw emotions

Submitted by iceman13c on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:26

I can only draw emotions then from that the rest of the face thats how i can draw Gin Ichimaru so good because he's always smiling The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Ok. I'll get the next one as

Submitted by MrEder on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:27

Ok. I'll get the next one as soon as possible. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

ok The Greatest Clan In

Submitted by iceman13c on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:31

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the picture I have is

Submitted by iceman13c on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 19:42

the picture I have is actually one of mine a lot of work had to use my cousins photo shop and I had to tune it up a lot The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

I see. I finished the my

Submitted by MrEder on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 09:07

I see. I finished the my latest drawing and I'll upload it later today. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

ok The Greatest Clan In

Submitted by iceman13c on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 16:11

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Here's a link to my latest

Submitted by MrEder on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:08

Here's a link to my latest drawing of Hatsumi. http://s625.photobucket.com/albums/tt331/MrEderRed/?action=view&current=HatsumiShinobiPublicAddress.jpg&newest=1"After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

ok now that just looks wierd

Submitted by iceman13c on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:16

ok now that just looks wierd never mind I think Night lover is better at drawing The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

I'm starting to get

Submitted by MrEder on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:19

I'm starting to get offended. If you don't want to draw Hatsumi, then just tell me. Please don't put down my artwork. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

sorry I just never saw

Submitted by iceman13c on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:22

sorry I just never saw hatsumi smile it just looks wierd to me the drawing at hand is good but i dont think I can draw that Night lover is better at it ask her sorry if I offended your work I cant even draw that The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Ah, I see what you're

Submitted by MrEder on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:26

Ah, I see what you're saying. Yeah, it's kind of awkward to see her smile. I thought you were putting down my drawings. Sorry for accusing you of that. I'll see if Night lover wants to draw her. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

I can ask he for you The

Submitted by iceman13c on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:28

I can ask he for you

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Sure, if you want to. I've

Submitted by MrEder on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:31

Sure, if you want to. I've already posted a new topic on the What's on Your Mind thread. But if you want to ask her, that would be much appreciated since I don't know her that well. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

I will The Greatest Clan

Submitted by iceman13c on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:31

I will

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Thanks much. "After a

Submitted by MrEder on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:33

Thanks much. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Your welcome The

Submitted by iceman13c on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 22:36

Your welcome

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I have a question to propose

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:18

I have a question to propose to you guys: Can cyborgs with full prosthetic bodies cry? I know that Kusanagi had tears fall from her eyes when she dove into that movie director's cyberbrain in the first season of Stand Alone Complex, but that wasn't really her prosthetic body. The reason I'm asking is because I really want Hatsumi to cry at an emotional part of my season that's coming up, but I don't know if full prosthetic bodies have the ability to generate tears. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Well she could be like susy

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:28

Well she could be like susy wets a lot and water and salt are put in her body and a tear gland but i dont know about the expretion The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Maybe they do have

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:30

Maybe they do have tear glands in order to clean their eyes since tears are used to clean your eyes. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

but she dowsnt have reflexes

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:35

but she dowsnt have reflexes in her eyes right then she only needs to blink cause af dirt or something in her eye and it just brushes it off with no wet or tears The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

I don't

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:36

I don't know, man. I just need to know if they have the ability to cry. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

ok everytime they drink what

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:40

ok everytime they drink what ever the H2O from it is syphened out and added natraul salt to it and it is there tears.... there just go with thatThe Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Yeah, I'm not going to try

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:41

Yeah, I'm not going to try to figure it out lol. I'll just go with what you said. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

yeah its the futura and they

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:45

yeah its the futura and they have nanobots I think they can figure it out

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Yeah. It's going to be one

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:46

Yeah. It's going to be one hell of a ride when you guys read this, which I am now finished with Episode 17. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

how many episodes The

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 16:48

how many episodes

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26 "After a thousand

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:04

26 "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

so how long is each episode

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:09

so how long is each episode paragraph wise

The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

It varies. Some are fairly

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:11

It varies. Some are fairly short while others are quite long. It's nigh impossible for me to judge how long 30 minutes would be when typing up a script. Like the first episode is pretty short and straightfoward, its pupose is to introduce Hatsumi and Yoshimura. Whereas Episode 8 or 9 is the longest so far because its purpose is to introduce an important plot twist. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

important plot twist you

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:16

important plot twist you should ask M night Shomolan for advise

The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Maybe. I've gotten the story

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:17

Maybe. I've gotten the story figured out, but the thing that I occassionally have trouble with is how to portray a plot twist. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

well take the main problem

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:22

well take the main problem and turn it to a good thing easy

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Ah, it's not that simple.

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:24

Ah, it's not that simple. Some times, plot twists are tragic, like when Akira Kawashima was killed. There's still after effects from that that the characters are still dealing with. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

then unexpected deaths good

Submitted by iceman13c on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:29

then unexpected deaths good guys gone bad and bad things are actually good The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Well, that's actually some

Submitted by MrEder on Thu, 08/27/2009 - 21:31

Well, that's actually some of my plot lol. Yoshimura is a bad guy who is the one who shuts down the Kaneren A.I. at the end, saving Hatsumi and Kusanagi's life. Hatsumi's brother is a bad guy being controlled by the A.I. Masahiro Takeda is a good guy turned terrorist turned back to good guy, and dies. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Dun Dun Dun! The

Submitted by iceman13c on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 15:22

Dun Dun Dun!

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Indeed "After a thousand

Submitted by MrEder on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 16:38

Indeed "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Yes Quite The Greatest

Submitted by iceman13c on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 17:29

Yes Quite

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All right, I just have

Submitted by MrEder on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 17:36

All right, I just have to tell you this badass part in Episode 10. Basically Masahiro Takeda and 6 hired mercenaries steal Hatsumi's personal Arm Suit. Like Takeda uses a .50 caliber sniper rifle to shoot the fuel line on Section 9's tilt rotor, forcing it to prematurely land. Section 9 then finds Takeda's armored van abandoned. Well, one of Takeda's mercenaries gives away the ambush that they were planning by cocking his assault rifle too loudly. Then a firefight erupts between Section 9 and Takeda and his men. Takeda uses a SAW machine gun with high velocity bullets and totally shoots the hell out of the boulders that Section 9 is using for cover. Fortunately, Takeda's gun jams and he has to abandon it for the assault rifle on his dead comrades body. Kusanagi tells him that's it's over and he should come peacefully, but it's not! One of Takeda's men pilots Hatsumi's Arm Suit and uses an anti-tank minigun against Section 9. You'll find out what happens when you read the script."After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

I thgink it would be cooler

Submitted by iceman13c on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 17:42

I thgink it would be cooler to see but it sound awesome

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Someday, I will get them to

Submitted by MrEder on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 17:43

Someday, I will get them to turn it into an anime. Someday... "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

mabey hey since its already

Submitted by iceman13c on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 17:49

mabey hey since its already in english all you need to do is ask the creator of the show and then ask bang zoom or manga to play it The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

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